In my opinion my presentetion was very good, because we have the powerpoint and a lot of images for explain everything. We also spend more than 5 minutes talking and that's important.
I was looking most of time looking at my friends and I didn't read more, but at the end I get nervous and I read more than normally and that's bad. I usually read something, like clue words. I didn't move a lot and that maybe was wrong because maybe they weren't looking or paying attention.
I organized most of the things that I said in order. I also used connectors. I think that there were sentences like woman who have children born in poverty may not be able to feed them, or headaches, ear infections, flu and colds may restrict a child from the focus of concentration, are rich both gramatically and vocabulary.
We seek information from the internet and then we write more or less the same but with our words. We found all the information on the internet.
The powerpoint was great but maybe we use some dark colors and we had to use normal color. I use some synonyms and one phrasel verb. I tried to have a good pronunciation and I checked the pronunciation with fato on the Intenet.
My bad point is that I got nervous and then I started reading more than usually, but appart of that I think that I did it well. Everyone can get nervous someday.
MY POWERPOINT
POVERTY
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